Tuesday 20 May 2014

Power surge

As I'm waiting in line my veins are pumping with excitement to go onto the Power Surge. 'Finally it's my turn' I said in my head as I give my ticket to the person in the ticket booth.



The person said I was to small for the ride but I gave him 5 dollars and we made an arrangement so he let me on. I got in my seat when I saw the person in front of me, I saw him before in a hot dog eating competition.



As I thought to myself I hope he doesn't vomit on me, I hope he doesn't vomit on me I kept on repeating that to myself in my head. We started to move, we were spinning through the air, we were hanging up side down, our arms and legs were flopping all around, but all I could think about was that guy. Then it happened, he vomited it was so disgusting that I thought I was going to vomit finally we stopped.



I got off the Power Surge my mind was so dizzy, I couldn't even walk or think straight the vomit was so disgusting but it was fun, it was so fun I actually wanted to go again, the vomit on my shirt didn't even change my mind about the Power Surge "ten out of ten".







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1 comment:

  1. great reading Jordan, very descriptive, keep up the good work.
    just remember to proof read your writing.
    great story. :)

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